The drawing style reminds me of Hayao Miyazaki's graphic novel Nausicaa. I loved this piece. What a strange love story.

yayz! may I post it in my Plurk? my friends enjoy reading your works ^^

Yay my friends now want to repost the link to your works! :D

story-wise, I liked the way you used the trickster archetype to create the Pareng Ahas. Is he a recurring character?

There were also points that reminded me of Warren Ellis and Carlos Pacheco's Starjammers LS and Hayao Miyazaki's Spirited Away.

art-wise, I loved the depiction of Asong Kalye, but some of the staccato shots could do with a change in perspective. For example, the "run-flee-hide" trio of shots could do with bringing the "camera" a little bit closer just so that the rhythm of reading doesn't slow down.

all in all, a solid story :)

Hahah you just have to workshop for me too (if I ever write anything I think is publish-able hahaha)

I loved that comic, you rock.

that comic is fantastic! ain't love GRAND?

Love, love, love this one, Andrew. Top level writing and art, as always.

- Tim

Well, I've always been a fan of yours ever since the poetry and writing for young adults days. So, at least for me, always. Astig! Hehehe.

- Tim

I like this one a lot. Blogged about it. -Kyu

Happy birthday!

Thank you for this entertaining little mythological story.

/Draug

Was just wondering, if they really did love each other, why didn't they hesitate when it came to killing each other at the end? Or maybe one of them would have sacrificed its life for the other one. Or could it be that they were so used to their being love eaters that they simply had no choice. Or did the snake simply trick them and they were actually incapable of love? Wow, this comic made me think. :-) noel